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Moment Of Truth
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Here I sit upon my cloud in Heaven
Kicking the dancing air around my bare feet
My wings behind me flutter lightly
As a cool wind passes
Bitter whispers scatter around
Spreading like wildfire in the kingdom
Their eyes burn as they stare
At the sinner before them
They know the truth
They have banished me
Thrown me from the paradise
I once was a part of
Rattling the golden gates viciously
Holding on to what I have left
They burn my fingertips
Only those who are pure can touch
The veils that shroud God
Opens beneath me
Clouds disperse
I descend, falling and falling
I do not call out
But continue my journey to Earth
My flight is over
As my body strikes the gravel
My Angel wings shatter
My body sears with pain
I... have become.... human
Clouds that use to grasp glimmers of eclipse and stars
Now usher storms and lightning
Am I a imperfection to their perfection?
A disgrace to their graceful ways?
No longer worthy to walk in Heaven
Dim lit figures crowd around me
Glaring down overwhelming me
Arms crossed over their chests
Ashamed? Repulsed? Disgusted?
I mutter with a shaking breath
I am sorry for what I have become
Kicking the dancing air around my bare feet
My wings behind me flutter lightly
As a cool wind passes
Bitter whispers scatter around
Spreading like wildfire in the kingdom
Their eyes burn as they stare
At the sinner before them
They know the truth
They have banished me
Thrown me from the paradise
I once was a part of
Rattling the golden gates viciously
Holding on to what I have left
They burn my fingertips
Only those who are pure can touch
The veils that shroud God
Opens beneath me
Clouds disperse
I descend, falling and falling
I do not call out
But continue my journey to Earth
My flight is over
As my body strikes the gravel
My Angel wings shatter
My body sears with pain
I... have become.... human
Clouds that use to grasp glimmers of eclipse and stars
Now usher storms and lightning
Am I a imperfection to their perfection?
A disgrace to their graceful ways?
No longer worthy to walk in Heaven
Dim lit figures crowd around me
Glaring down overwhelming me
Arms crossed over their chests
Ashamed? Repulsed? Disgusted?
I mutter with a shaking breath
I am sorry for what I have become
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Hey Deviants
This is a collab between myself and
, we havent done one together since Chained Angel and Through her father's eyes so its been a while. Please check out her gallery for some awesome anime drawings and brilliant literature 
The picture used with this piece belongs to
who is a AMAZING deviant, Please have a look at her gallery, i can promise you, you wont regret it 
This was inspired by life, as it sums up what im going through and how i feel right now. It tells the experience of an Angel in Heaven being condemmed for what they have become ...
Comments are welcomed
As always enjoy
This is a collab between myself and
, we havent done one together since Chained Angel and Through her father's eyes so its been a while. Please check out her gallery for some awesome anime drawings and brilliant literature The picture used with this piece belongs to
who is a AMAZING deviant, Please have a look at her gallery, i can promise you, you wont regret it This was inspired by life, as it sums up what im going through and how i feel right now. It tells the experience of an Angel in Heaven being condemmed for what they have become ...
Comments are welcomed
As always enjoy
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This was beautiful and fragile and heartbreaking all at the same time. You are clearly a talented writer, my friend. I can't help but feel that this ended on a much too melancholy note. I just want to give you a great big hug after reading this!